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D. Bradley's avatar

Wow, man, this is incredible. The imagery and symbolism is seriously breathtaking. I’ll need to read this a few times over, but bravo!!!

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J.M.S. Tanjim's avatar

Look who's here! Thank you very much Bradley for reading it through. I like how you noticed it in such detail. Looking forward to your next stuff. You never fail to deliver.

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Joseph Coleman's avatar

I read it twice. Cool imagery going on here

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D. Bradley's avatar

Here I am! Awesome work, man!

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Offscreenshaman's avatar

The parchment stays blank, but the echo lingers. Gorgeous work.

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J.M.S. Tanjim's avatar

Yes, the echo lingers for centuries.

I love this comment. Thank you so much for taking your time to read it.

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J. Katz's avatar

Awesome. I’ve never wanted to read the word “skeletal” or “skeleton” over and over again until now haha.

I will re-read a bit later as I read for image etc line by line and not as a complete picture or concept/story and I’m late to start my day job, but really cool, and I’m glad my note got a taker… you’re the first!

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J.M.S. Tanjim's avatar

Glad that you liked the imagery. Thanks for the comment. But, go to work for now. You can re-read it anytime you want.

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J. Katz's avatar

Ah I see I caught the rhymes now too. Yeah the style does resonate with me, and it’s like a cleaner and less abstract or less psychedelic version of a combination some pieces I’ve written— utterly subjective to me of course, most of which aren’t even on Substack lol

I’ll check out your other stuff too.

Thanks <3

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