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D. Bradley's avatar

Amazing! I’m going to read it over a few more times, but on first read I love the imagery. It was almost as if a dark and ominous presence was guiding me from line to line to show the world develop around me. The kingfisher line and the after all a human he is line were great. Bravo! I’m gonna read it again!

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J.M.S. Tanjim's avatar

Thank you for Bradley for taking time to read it. And I am glad that you liked it. You're a great poet.

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